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One of the advantages of studying in Jason’s class is the fantastic techniques, strategies and secrets of writing academic English. To illustrate the students can be given specialist vocabulary, which might improve the levels of students’ writing scores/the student’s writing scores

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There are huge benefits in group work.  These can be summarized by three main points.

The benefits of group work can be summarized into three main points.

Thus, in order to implement such a (this type of)study method, it should be considered that significant benefits can be offered to the group members.

The second benefit is practising everyone’s responsibility. If there are three or four people in the group the members/participants may/might not be able to contribute equally.  Students in the group should follow the leader’s direction.

Team work is mostly positive.  This is because the team members can share the ideas with other partners.  Also they can recognize a new idea and learn how the others process information.

Nowadays, there are many methods of teaching that promote/encourage/support students working together.  This argues that group work can create more accurate learning process.

However, working in a group (in groups) at university not only has advantages but also disadvantages occur with students.

As a result, group work might cause problems.  Although, it has a several benefits such as learning new moduls, encourage and working togethe in the futur with difference people.

She may be a movie star- She is a movie star (100%).  She may cook tonight. Eman cooks every night (100%)

Water boils at 100 degrees.  The sun rises in the morning. We are in England.

Group work is positive.  Everyone will pass the TEEP test.

To complete a presentation presentation some students could finish the powerpoint slides while others may do some research for this topic

Similarly working in groups may have some problems, which could be very common.

During some activities students have a limited time.  So, time management is important. Also perhaps two or three students want to be the leader, but only one leader is more effective. 

So not always group working is good.  But sometimes need to do to bring in to study in a team.

In practice, some problems might appear during this approach, especially with irresponsible students who you can not depend on. So dealing with different kind of characters may decrease the quality of the final work.  

The first problem may be if the group could not know how to  communicate with different kinds of personalities.

It seems there could be many advantages of group work.  It could be argued that group work may be is more useful than individual work at universities.

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Our class effort at the unemplyment question

Unemployment has been a worldwide social problem over the last ten years.  It could have a huge negative effect on both country and the citizen.  This essay will discuss the main cause and effects for unemployment and will provide some evaluated solutions.

One cause of unemployment is that there are not enough jobs for people.  According to population growth and the older age of retirement, there is more competition to get a job.  For example one job opportunity has one hundred candidates.  So, one of the solutions is that the age of retirement should be reduced to the age of 50.  However if the age of retirement is reduced employees will lose 15 years of salary.  Also the government or companies will need to pay the pension earlier that the current retirement age.  This might mean they will lose money. In addition companies will lose their experienced workers so need to think ahead in order to stay in business.

Another factor which causes unemployment is that a significant part of the population are not qualified.  This is because the investment in education by some governments is not enough.  In this way some private organisations should offer specialised training in creating new opportunities in skilled jobs.  One drawback is that this is a long term investment, but can afford the guarantee that people will be able to work in these companies.  Furthermore it could be profitable because employees will be shaped according to the enterprise.  Thus this is an investment in the employees and the whole organisation.

A more recent reason for high unemployment is due to people being replaced by machines.  So the number of jobless people will be increased and reduced skilled hands.  Training and assigning specialists such as engineers, programmers to maintain and operate machines would help to decrease unemployment.  However training the  workforce might be a huge project.  Moreover the cost of training and maintenance might be less efficient that expected. So it is worthwhile considering the overall impact of new technology.

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Travel broadens the mind paragraph

New experiences when travelling allows people to open their minds.  This is because people have the opportunity to know other cultures.  This can develop a different way of thinking and vision.  Also learning new customs in another culture means people can compare their culture with the new culture.  For example some Chinese people question why countries use a knife and fork when they are not used to this habit. It is interesting that when travellers are in a new place they tend to relax.  So relaxing could be the best way to question anything new. Therefore comparison and questioning can lead to thinking in a different perspective.

Paragraph 1 overseas education

One of the advantantages of having an overseas education is the high quality of education.  Getting a higher salaried job when you return to your country is more possible. This is because esteemed qualifications are more valuable from universities in countries such UK, Canada, USA.  In addition methods of teaching, qualified lecturers and high standards of equipment are common.  In Asia it is typical to have unclean classrooms and too many students for one teacher.  Furthermore many important subjects are not available to be studied in home countries.  In Iraq and Kazakstan rare subjects cannot be found in universities.  So an overseas degree is an important factor to develop our home country